Hi Jason It's Mark from Paroa School Greymouth. I love the kind of decoration you have done with your writing so it attracts people and makes them read what you have done. but maybe next time you could make your writing easier to see. And maybe if you wanted to you could write a bit more in depth like why was it cool. Was it hot and if it not to personal what was the time and were? these are just some things to consider... thanks Mark.
This work is pretty good I like the drawing that you did for it. It makes it look pretty nice for the background but the post is named "Writing" but It looks more like a drawing maybe next time you could make the writing more bigger to read and add more writing?
Hi my name is Reid form paroa school
ReplyDeletelooks really nice drawing
next time can you make the sign bigger so you can read it
Hi Jason
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jason from Paroa school grey mouth it looks so good but next time maybe you can make the writing bigger.
From Jason
Hi Jason It's Mark from Paroa School Greymouth. I love the kind of decoration you have done with your writing so it attracts people and makes them read what you have done. but maybe next time you could make your writing easier to see. And maybe if you wanted to you could write a bit more in depth like why was it cool. Was it hot and if it not to personal what was the time and were? these are just some things to consider... thanks Mark.
ReplyDeleteHey there Mark thanks for wonderful comment.
DeleteI will try do better next time.
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ReplyDeleteHi, it's Charlie from Paroa school. good job I like your work.
ReplyDeleteHi Jason I really liked how you put a lot of colour in it
ReplyDeletenext time you could make it a bit bigger so I can see the writing
thanks, Brayden.
Hello Jason, I'm Harley from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteThis work is pretty good I like the drawing that you did for it. It makes it look pretty nice for the background but the post is named "Writing" but It looks more like a drawing maybe next time you could make the writing more bigger to read and add more writing?
- Harley.